Tuesday, May 3, 2011

Short Story (Rough Draft)

I woke up at 9 in the morning to my mom's voice telling me to wake up. Then told me to go to the corner store which is called Willie's store. While I was leaving she stopped me and gave me a shopping list and money. After I paid for the food I went home on the way there my friend Oscar stopped me and asked if I wanted to play soccer. I told him sure let me just ask my mom. I got home and gave my mom the groceries while asking her if I can go play soccer. She said Yes I was happy Oscar came to my house with some friends and we started playing soccer in the frontyard of my house. We then heard a strange sound telling us to not step on the grass. We looked around and saw the old man who always sat there smoking Cuban cigars. I then suggested why not go to the park. Oscar then said okay but when he said that Luis kicked the ball high in the air and it landed in my neighbors lamppost. We were all scared we all ran to the park leaving nothing in sight except a broken lamppost and glass on the floor. when I came back from the park my neighbor was in my house i was scared.

She then said " someone broke my lamppost do you know who it was Ulises?"

I responded with fear and shvers "no." She responded "ok if you now who it was just tell me ok." I said" ok"

While she was leaving I said "....."